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Wednesday, 26 February 2014
My African Praise Poem
My reflection: My favourite parts were and are my refrain (Fun in the silence of shadows) and my cat lover part. The tricky part was when I compared myself to the earthquake. Next time I will make it more detailed.
4 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Dayton, this is absolutely marvellous. I don't know how you came up with this beautiful imagery, but it really does describe you wonderfully!
My dear Dayton, wow! How beautiful your poem is - and deep... You are so talented and gifted - I discover more of your special soul every day. Thank you! Lots of luv, Mum
My dear Dayton, you are a true artist - this is so beautiful...! What sensitivity and artistic talent you have, my sweet boy... :-) I look forward to more beauty from you! Mum xx
4 comments:
Dayton, this is absolutely marvellous. I don't know how you came up with this beautiful imagery, but it really does describe you wonderfully!
My dear Dayton, wow! How beautiful your poem is - and deep... You are so talented and gifted - I discover more of your special soul every day.
Thank you!
Lots of luv,
Mum
My dear Dayton, you are a true artist - this is so beautiful...!
What sensitivity and artistic talent you have, my sweet boy... :-)
I look forward to more beauty from you!
Mum
xx
wow Dayton,I had to read that over and over
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